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Comment by Jakob Escobar on December 10, 2015 at 1:50pm

We understand things come up and your project is lacking other things but overall its cool and nice job with syncing the music (sound Effects) to the render out version of your project.

Comment by Ryan Asbra on December 9, 2015 at 2:10pm

Very well drawn and colored scene, however I think it would benefit you to show the water flowing downstream.

Comment by Aaron Loyd on December 9, 2015 at 1:55pm

I feel like this would be a great video for VideoPaper (https://www.reddit.com/r/videopaper).

Something you could add is a sort of shade in the sky that changes with time. Sort of like the sun coming up, then going down, then it's dark at night. You could then add details to that like stars, the moon, different insects, things of that sort.

Also, where is this water going?

Comment by Brandon F Perez Loredo on December 8, 2015 at 3:57pm

good animation liked the scenery  well drawn 

Comment by Michael Antony Matthew Toups on December 8, 2015 at 3:54pm

Love the flow of water

Comment by wes massuh on December 8, 2015 at 3:54pm

Excelente, muy muy caliente. could have used more sharks with freaking lazer beams attached to their heads tho...

Comment by Ryan Ong on December 8, 2015 at 3:32pm

I liked the scenery, it was really well drawn. You could've added some flow lines to make the water seem like it's moving.

Comment by Yesai Tovar on December 8, 2015 at 3:32pm

Nice animation, but you can not really tell where the water is going.

Comment by Jacob Moore on December 8, 2015 at 3:28pm

Very well drawn. 

Might make it a little more clear where the water's going but overall very well done.

Comment by Alexandra R. Spink on December 8, 2015 at 3:26pm

It is a very nice scenery, especially the rocks... but I was a bit confused which way the water was flowing. Maybe you could draw some flow lines in the water to show which way the water is flowing.

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