finalproject asmaa

Comment

Comment by Chase Grimm on February 29, 2016 at 2:53pm

more sounds during the fighting scene would have completed the video but i like how it has all drawn.

Comment by Lucy McMahon on February 22, 2016 at 1:46pm

The key-framing was really smooth, it was my favorite part. I wish there had been more sound throughout instead of just gaps of silence. Very cute idea though!

Comment by Analise Cole on February 22, 2016 at 1:24pm

The text is a little fast and could have had a few more seconds of screen time, but overall its a really cute idea!!

Comment by Madeleine Donovan on February 19, 2016 at 3:40pm

This short is actually more short than you would think, or want. However, aside from the apparent lack of a soundtrack, the overall project is very well done, with good images, smooth animation, and great sound effects. Just remember to add a soundtrack next time.

Comment by Brandon F Perez Loredo on February 19, 2016 at 3:22pm

make it a little bit longer i enjoy it

Comment by Jonathan Nixon on February 19, 2016 at 3:14pm

More sound before that loud horn fanfare would've been nice. or at least a warning.

Comment by Yesai Tovar on February 19, 2016 at 3:06pm

Great Animation, it would've been better if the fight was longer, great story by the way.

Comment by Justin Devetter on February 19, 2016 at 3:06pm

Great work. All you have to do is work on timing.

Comment by Jacob Moore on February 19, 2016 at 3:04pm

Might work on timing and such and just slowing it down to make it a little easier to understand. Really enjoyed the fight scene though. 

Comment by Kace Frels-Henry on February 19, 2016 at 1:51pm

I'm always a big fan of frame by frame animation in flash, so I very much so enjoyed that fight scene. One thing that is hard to do when making an animation is timing. The end felt really quick and it was hard to understand what was going on. Other then that, Bien!

• ‹ Previous
• 1
• 2
• Next ›
• Page