Green Man (Independent Project 1)

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Comment by Logan Brown on December 14, 2015 at 3:47pm

it was very well done and I enjoyed watching it, great job bro

Comment by James Landwermeyer on December 14, 2015 at 3:30pm

Very enjoyable story. I especially liked the sound effects used. Overall a flawless stop motion.

Comment by Natasha Hernandez on December 10, 2015 at 10:53pm

The story is cute and enjoyable. The music is nice to listen to, and to me sounds like the Barney theme song. Your lighting is inconsistent at points. For example, the part before the solider turned the laptop on doesn't have the lamp on, and after that the lamp is on. Overall, you did a good job.

Comment by Nabil Bayoumi on December 9, 2015 at 8:30pm

Haha, very enjoyable! The story and acting was spot on! Only critique I could give is to produce more consistent lighting. By setting your camera to manual settings, that will allow you to have control of the shot, and not let the green auto capture take over. Other than that, it was still very well made!

Comment by Justin Banh on December 9, 2015 at 2:45pm

The intro and outro looked great, the audio was timed well, and it was a well developed story. Only critique I can give is maybe change the lightning a bit near the outro, maybe a more consistent light on him.

Comment by Tyler Perkins on December 9, 2015 at 2:37pm

2 Thumbs Up!

Comment by Lucy McMahon on December 9, 2015 at 1:59pm

The intro and outro look very professional and are timed well. Your story was funny too! The only critique I have would maybe be to try and make your animation smoother ( I know thats hard with stop motion ) and also maybe better lighting so the audience can see what the green man is doing a little better. Overall, really great video! :)

Comment by Corbyn Gan on December 9, 2015 at 1:45pm

Video is great and really nice, but your room is a little bit messy :(

Comment by Alejandro Rogel on December 8, 2015 at 4:02pm

Good job. Looks great and you could tell how much effort you put into it. The music gets kind of annoying, but it's was really cool

Comment by Yesai Tovar on December 8, 2015 at 3:28pm

Great Job, the animation is awesome and the music as well, It seems that you put a lot of effort and that is why I like it.

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