Dolisy Independent Project 2-- Lifeline

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Comment by Davis Schiess on April 16, 2015 at 1:46pm

I really like the entire concept. I liked the music. 

The flash animations were good. Not amazing, but that makes sense from only having a single animator.

There should be more exaggerated VFX for an animation that takes place at an EDM concert. More flashing lights, more lens flare, more camera shake, particle effects, add some light burst effects. In my opinion, those would go perfectly with this song and animation. Maybe its just me, but if you are going to have an animation at an EDM concert, there has to be over-the-top flashing lights and craziness.

Comment by Sabrina Walden on April 16, 2015 at 1:38pm

This was really well animated the timing was perfect and the story was really interesting and fit the song really well. The only critique I have is that I kind of wished that the original character was in her dream instead of the stick figure designs but even with the stick figures you still have a lot of personality and expression so it didn't really matter. 

Comment by Mia Alexandra Mendez on April 16, 2015 at 1:33pm

Amazing animation, really loved the lifeline scene. I think you could have brought down the volume on the beeping. I also suggest putting a warning for the flashing lights.

Comment by Paxton Gyves on April 15, 2015 at 12:25pm

I loved this!  Even as stick figures, they really have personality!