Pollution - Trailer

Comment

Comment by Ryan Ong on February 25, 2016 at 3:27pm

Nice animations, but the message wasn't clear and the ending felt rushed

Comment by Alejandro Rogel on February 19, 2016 at 3:23pm

Nice 3D animation and it was interesting to see actual pollution in the world, although the message isn't very clear in the video. Still, a pretty good production.

Comment by Christopher Lockard on February 18, 2016 at 1:54pm

I think stating "credits" could be taken out, but I like the idea of the trailer.Its very interesting.

Comment by Max Murray on February 18, 2016 at 12:34pm

the message of the video wasn't very clear to me but you had cool visuals and audio. the video also kept my attention. 8/10 would watch again 

Comment by Wade Watson on February 18, 2016 at 12:07pm

I like it. It's hard to make an animation about pollution exciting but y'all did it. The credits were cool. The reflection on the windshield looked very difficult but worth it. 

Comment by Aline Dolisy on February 18, 2016 at 11:50am

Interesting visuals, I enjoyed the different effects to show the pollution our world faces, and I thought that the 3D cars were well animated and well done. However, I am struggling to understand your message here. What were these clips trying to convey to the viewer? Aside from that, I felt that transitions were smooth, the music flowed well, and I liked the text you used. Nice job. 

Comment by Cyan Haskins on February 18, 2016 at 11:50am

I think some of the animation could have been smoother, for example less instability on the reflection on the windshield since the road seems to be smooth.

The transition from quiet nature to the loud cars was well directed!

Comment by Andrea Nebhut on February 18, 2016 at 11:42am

All of the clips were well chose, however the video could have been improved through smoother transitions and more attention to what the exact message you're trying to get across is.  Cars produce pollution, sure, but what do you suggest as an alternative?  What exactly is your group fighting to happen?

The juxtaposition of the screeching cars against the more peaceful nature scenes was stunning and really grabbed the viewer's attention!

Comment by Jakob Escobar on February 17, 2016 at 1:55pm

I like the message of the production, things to improve on is to go over your work and watch it because some of the scenes got replayed I dont know if that was how it was suppose to be or not. Love some of the effects the car scene where you spun the tires could have used some work maybe more smoke or longer smoke duration. the last thing that could uses some improvement is the credits maybe some roles of who was doing what I understand its a trailer. overall quality was great. 

3 Nuggets/ 5 Nuggets

Comment by Mia Alexandra Mendez on February 17, 2016 at 11:02am

I think that the smoke from the tires could have been worked on a little better to give it a more realistic effect.  The animation itself is pretty interesting but I really like the change in scene when it goes from something peaceful to very dramatic.

• ‹ Previous
• 1
• 2
• Next ›
• Page