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The Fox and the Bunny: Ayoung Lee
This is about a fox and a bunny of course. The bunny is just jumping around minding its own business, then a hungry fox comes and tries to eat the bunny. However, the bunny teleports somewhere else and the fox wasn't able to eat...
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Comment by Noah Killeen on December 7, 2011 at 1:13pm
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I must say, your video is exceptionally random... in a good way! Overall, its fantastically animated. The only thing I would point out is that occasionally one of the moving symbols will leave 'lines' behind. I'm not quite sure what's causing it, but if you go back through your frames you should be able to select and delete those pesky lines.
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Comment by Kitty Offer on December 5, 2011 at 6:03pm
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Hehe awesome and cute!! I realyl loved the bunny on the beach, that was really cute haha!
On improvements though you might want the end to last a little longer. It might look long enough in flash when making it but you have to keep in mind when uploading a video online the last 3 seconds can commonly get cut off. It's generally only half a second (12 frames at 24 fps or 15 at 30 fps) but it can be longer. Other than that maybe blend in the title a little bit better (I would suggest reducing the alpha over time or another fade out or something, that way you can get the slow feel of winter and can be a little bit more surprised and in wonder at the bunny hopping on the stage) and maybe addign sound it's a realyl good animation!! :D
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Comment by Kaitlin Carlson on December 5, 2011 at 1:53pm
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I think the drawings are really cool, but the keyframes are a little choppy. It's also pretty fast.
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